Curiouser and curiouser… I’m not sure yet what to think of this girl (but I’m enjoying the uncertainty nonetheless).

Want to step on my toes, usey?

I’m left wondering if she can actually talk to animals, and what the heck happened to her dad.

awesome again.
I love Aveline as a character so far.. you just want to learn more about her…

the squirrel was trying to say her dad was in trouble, but Aveline’s squirrel was rusty and she thought it said her nanny was a double..

Step step step.

Great beginning to set things up, and then quite the bit of character in the middle part, all leading up to one heck of a surprise at the ending. Sure, it may be innocuous that he’s on the table, but it still made for a great ending.
p.s. Where ya been? This story is from 23 days ago, and it’s your most recent.

i think Someone is holding Anna hostage.

I just stumbled upon this and love it! Great description and characterization